Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Narutos DREAM COME TRUE!!





David’s Naruto Fanfic


Naruto Uzumaki lay in his bed, staring at the ceiling daydreaming. The first traces of morning light were seeping through the closed curtains. Today was the day he was to be assigned a genin (junior ninja) team, as he had reached jounin (senior ninja) only a few weeks back.



So much had changed since his first team. Sakura Haruno was currently jounin and the second best medical ninja in the village. Sasuke Uchiha, who Naruto had recently brought back to the village, was recovering from his many years of err... travelling, as well as spending some time with a certain pink haired medic.


An alarm started blaring, signalling that it was time to get up. Naruto swung his feet out of bed and stood up. He walked into the bathroom and had a shower, hoping the hot water would wash the sleepiness from his brain. He threw on his clothes and walked into his small kitchen, grabbing piece of toast and the unknowingly expired soymilk.


He sat down at the table and moved to pick up the morning newspaper. GRRRR the expired soymilk is taking its effect on Naruto. Arghh!!!!!! Naruto rushes to the toilet OOOO calmly oozing the poison out of his stomach. Finally finishing up his business he reaches out for the toilet paper and finds out the roll is finished!!! Screaming out from the top of his lungs ARGHHHH!!!! He desperately rushes into the shower to clean himself.


Finally coming back to his breakfast he finds lying on top of it was an official Konoha scroll addressed to him; he picked it up and opened it. He scanned the contents, it read:

To: Uzumaki Naruto, Jounin

Dear, Brat.

I assume you are aware, that today you will be given a Genin team; you may test them any way you chose. Your job will be to determine whether they will continue to train as Genin or return to the academy. You have been assigned team 5, it runs thus:

Ichigo Kazuki
Hattori Takumi
Hoshi Minako


Please meet at the Hokage's tower at 10 am for further information.

NOTICE: Testing method no.34 has been banned in favour of more acceptable methods. (No.34 testing method=putting the Genin into life or death situations)

The fifth Hokage Lady Tsunade

Naruto rolled his eyes, knowing that she had specifically assigned him team 5 simply to humour him. This team was a comparable group to the one he had experienced when he was younger: two students who had passed with the highest rankings and one student who had passed with the lowest. Naruto was the lowest passing ninja at his time.

Naruto took the short route out the window and began to make his way towards the Hokage's tower. As he strolled through the village, he began to think of ways he might test his Genin team. He of course had ideas of his own but he figured he'd use Kakashi's old bell test (bell test=Attaching the bells to his clothes and having the Genin steal the bells of him).

Naruto was so lost in thought that he didn't realise that those who passed him on the sidewalk would stop and do a double take. Girls from 10 to 13 would blush after one look and hurry away. While any 14 and older would smile flirtatiously. As well as young adults that would try to approach him, trying any means of seducing techniques to achieve falling in love with them.

Naruto arrived at the Hokage's tower a couple minutes late, unsurprisingly instead of taking the front entrance; he jumped to the roof that was 10feet tall and swung himself in through the open window, landing gracefully on the nose of his face.

"You're late Naruto," Tsunade said, not even looking up from the scroll she was reading.

Naruto struggling to lift his broken down body from his plummet "Sorry baa-chan." She just sighed and stood up. The noise in the room died down and the intense meeting commenced. Most of the information was on what they'd be undertaking and which testing methods were appropriate.

Naruto took the time to scan the room for familiar faces; Shikamaru the number 1 Jounin in his year sat in the corner with a look of complete and utter boredom on his face. Naruto knew that he was genuinely analysing every single little detail in the room.

Sakura (Narutos pass team member and one sided love) was listening closely and even tacking notes. Sasuke (Narutos greatest rival but best friend) was pointlessly playing with a kunai (Ninja Knife), throwing it in the air and catching it again.

Naruto was surprised to see him there; he hadn't heard that the Uchiha (Sasuke) had reached jounin. Naruto was shaken out of his daydream when he heard his name.

"Naruto, stay behind after the meeting?" Tsunade said. He nodded, not that he really had a right or courage to refuse. People began to file out, walking to the academy to meet their new pupils. Tsunade indicated for him to sit in front of her desk.

"What's up?" Naruto asked, taking a sip on the tea he was offered. Tsunade sat back in her chair.

"I've decided to retire soon, and you, Naruto, WILL BE MY ……………….. SUCESSOR"(Naruto’s dream of becoming a Hokage) she said.

Thunderstruck from her comment “What did you say?” "You’re teasing me aren’t cha?" Naruto asked his eyes wide. With a genuine facial expression she nodded, smiling at the young ninja's excitement. They spoke for a while longer, discussing Naruto's training and when he will take over...getting carried away with excitement Naruto checked the time and jumped out of his seat. “Crap! Sorry baa-chan, I have to go! I'm really late." She nodded.

"Go along and meet your team." Naruto smiled with finally achieving his dream and swung himself out the window not noticing the wall in front of him. “SMACKK” Naruto face planting on the wall...”Good luck!" she yelled after him, but the future sixth Hokage was already out of sight, leaping from building to building hiding his swollen battered face

3 comments:

  1. Hey John,

    Your fanfic is cool! Really enjoyed reading it. You've really improved the format, making it much easier to read. The mistakes are pretty much corrected, and the humour is great! Nice job.

    Julia

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  2. Sup David, awesome finish to your fanic, i see you have broken it up into paragraphs making it easier to read. Your draft fanfic was great and I was expecting a great final fanfic, definately lived up to expectations.

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